With most things, to grasp what you are trying to do, its good to look at the level above. I have come across a fantastic resource from an affiliated University of my Academy; The University of Greenwich. The pack pictured above contains three PhD thesis’ from the field of education. Its really interesting to read through these and then compare it to my work. It gives a great perspective on referencing (were talking about two per sentence) and statical analyses.
There is supposedly an open on-line respositary of these, if and when i find it, you will find the link here.

Posted by Toby 
Posted by Toby